This review is made by reason 3, if you have any questions or anything else to comment feel free to Private Message me.You may also ask me to review your map again.
A mix or RPG and Strategy/Risk maps, rather boring with nothing new or special.
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+]Your map file size is small, which is good when you host this map on Bnet.
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-]First of all you seem to prefer to describe us the changes you made rather than the map itself.Your map is lacking in-game description too.You have to add more game tips as its really hard for new players to understand the game's purpose.
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-]Your map was unprotected so i looked over your triggers.I noticed that you leak, and you have to learn how to use variables.
I also noticed a few "cheats".My opinion is that if you want to cheat in your map you can go and do it, but if you want to upload it to this site it has to be fair for everyone.If you want your map to get approved remove all of your cheats immediately.
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-]You have to add a few custom spells to make your map interesting.Right now it seems really boring and i lost my interest in playing it really fast.
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-]You should add a few shops with items that could help in combat.
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-]Your terrain is lacking, improve it.In addition, you only have edited half of the terrain in your map.
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-]Your units seemed random placed to me, did you had anything in mind when you placed them?
Overall rating:2/5 - vote for rejection
Remove cheats immediately, and try to improve your knowledge over http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/trigger-gui-editor-tutorials-279/variables-5896/.Then try making it more interesting by adding some special events or at least a few custom spells.Improving and finishing your terrain wouldn't be bad either.
~ r3