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11:00, 30th Jul 2009
Linaze: Fairly good cinematic. In need of some improvements, though:
-There were several grammatical and spelling errors.
-Some scenes lacked nearly any camera movement at all, which felt very stiff.
-There needs to be more stuff going on and not just dialog to make this more entertaining, I'm referring to more action, movement etc.
On the whole, though, it is a decent cinematic with good looking terrain, some cool action and also, the episodes keep getting better and better.
Linaze: Fairly good cinematic. In need of some improvements, though:
-There were several grammatical and spelling errors.
-Some scenes lacked nearly any camera movement at all, which felt very stiff.
-There needs to be more stuff going on and not just dialog to make this more entertaining, I'm referring to more action, movement etc.
On the whole, though, it is a decent cinematic with good looking terrain, some cool action and also, the episodes keep getting better and better.