Custom-Frostsabre

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09:12, 15th Jun 2014
Orcnet: Daffa the Mage's comment

 

[eubz]

Please, improve your description. You might want to add some screenshots, also.

 

[CamboStrike]

Please, improve your description. You might want to add some screenshots, also.

Thank you for your comment. I'm trying to fixing it ^_^

 

[jellybean375]

I Love It

 

[CamboStrike]

I Love It

Thanks... ^_^

 

[Daffa]

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Review

The Hive Workshop Official

Map Reviewer: Daffa the Mage Map Name: Custom-Frostsabre Map Author: CamboStrike Originality I must admit it has some originality (the recipes) and the concept it's not pretty easy to complete (ehm... Melee + RPG/AOS) However, the execution doesn't turn well, I recommend make the shop building into neutral buildings which is available from the start instead of being buildable. The hero limit which is broken is also an issue, you need to sort it out, exceeding 3 heroes in Melee can be a major melee breaker. Score: 60/100 Presentation The presentation is an issue, especially you forget to include Credits to the game quest. your Hive presentation is also not amazing or even decent, you should look to Kobas Map Description Templates or Vengeancekael's Map Description Generator, if you want the advanced way, go check BB Codes Score: 20/100 Design Some Icons doesn't match their models, you should get icons that are suitable for the model (ex case in map : Paladin [Your Version]) Altar upgrades are also strange and a little annoying (unless you're undead) Score: 59/100 Triggers Your trigger are inefficient, you can merge them and avoid doing too much chaos. Also, consider destroying Special Effects, they can cause lags if left behind. Score: 14/100 Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection! Object Data Some hero abilities felt strange (Archimonde summon Murlocs?) and doesn't suit well. The second worker (for shops) are considerably weak to enemy fire. The Altar Upgrade also doesn't make sense for some reason, and the Heroes made by Hero Gateway shouldn't include Undead and Demon ones and Demon Gate vice versa. Score: 71/100 Gameplay There's no major issue with gameplay. However, a major concern, there's a chance for lag if you merge to much items (check the trigger section of the review for why). Score: 23/100 Need help with triggers/memory leaks? Make a thread in the Triggers & Scripts Section. Got any World Editor related questions? Make a thread in the World Editor Help Zone Section. Tutorials Final Score: 41.167/100 2/5 Vote for Rejection Contact: (Visitor Message) / (Private Message) / (Map Reviewers)

 

[CamboStrike]

Thank you for the review. I'll be looking into the problems and hope to correct them as much as I could possibly able to and willing to break the impossibles for a better future map. ^_^

[2014-06-07] Map updated and improved (trigger). ^_^
[2014-06-08] Fixed icons.

[2014-06-15] Map was fixed. Please review it again