Here is my rating and comment:
1 - 10 points go on originality
1 - 10 points go on object editor work
1 - 10 points go on scripting
1 - 10 points go on terrain
1 - 10 points go on bug free
1 - 10 points go on gameplay
*/fun factor
1 - 10 points go on lag
1 - 10 points go on proper submission and crediting
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That equals 80 points max.
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+ Cinematic
1 - 10 points on camera work
1 - 10 points on dialog
1 - 10 points on music and or voice acting
- Cinematic
Object editor work
* Not in cinematic
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That equals 100 points max.
Points
To get a Hive grade over 1/5 at least 50% of the 80 (Triggered map) or of the 100 (Cinematic map) points is needed. That means at least 40 or 50 points. However if a map gets rated over 1/5 by me, that doesn't mean that I will imidietly vote it to be approved.
Originality: 7 points +
I haven't seen a map like this, when you build at one point and fight at another. Very interesting concept I liked.
Object editor work: 2 point -
Work work and work. You need custom spells, sounds, more icons. Fix hero descriptions. Also custom items.
Scripting: 4 points -
Genneraly fine, but when the opposing team killed our castle they got a defeat message? Fix.
Terrain: 4 points -
At the battlefield it is okay, but needs more work. The bases part is supposed to be that way so its okay.
Bug Free: 3 points -
Fix the ending bug. No others were found.
Gameplay/Fun Factor: 5 points +
It is fun to play. But you need a variety of units and more custom features, game modes, explain to newbs how to play.
Lag: 7 points +
Fine loading time, some lag ingame.
Proper submission and crediting: 6 points +
You credited the authors, but you need images and more description.
In overall:
43 / 80
53% minimal 50% met.
For the hive grade:
2/5 I suggest this map for:
On Hold
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In overall it is a fun map that has some issues to be dealt with. You must fix the object editor problems, more custom things to add. The ending bug is a pain too. When you dealt with this problems I am sure this will get approved.
Good Luck, bounty hunter2
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