Slave and Master

[Dreadnought[dA]]

~Slave and Master~

Taste me once, you'll never stop.
I'm self destruction. A thriving crop.
Never forgotten, I'm in your mind.
You will seek me till your blind.
No more food. No more drink.
Swallow your tears. Your on the brink.
You know not life. Never-ending strife.
Powder on a mirror, I stab like a knife.
Hated by all, but those who gain.
Slave and master, until your slain.

 

[arafor]

Nice Poem man and nice theme with it. Flows great.

 

[bestoboy]

I first thought this was going to be a story about BDSM lol

Nice poem, cool rhyming scheme, but just a little grammar mistake. All the "your"s used should be "you're" , It's an honest mistake

 

[thegatesofsyn]

thats a sik poem and it would make a mad song lyric