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14:48, 21st Dec 2009
67chrome: The team colored bandanna really is an eyesore, something should be done with it. The entire skin is obnoxiously monochromatic as well, the skin tone could at least be a different hue or saturation from the rest of the skin, and there really should be a secondary color added throughout the skin as well, such as on the edges of the robe, in ropes around the robe or something. The shading seems a little weak to, especially in the areas under the team-color bandanna and under the shoulder bits to. The texture applied over the skin really looks like a texture applied over it because it doesn't curve and contour with the folds of the fabric as it really should. Overall the freehand work is decent. The bright team color showing through is enough to say this skin doesn't work properly though :||
This skin has a sufficient enough work needed on it that I'm rejecting it for now as well
67chrome: The team colored bandanna really is an eyesore, something should be done with it. The entire skin is obnoxiously monochromatic as well, the skin tone could at least be a different hue or saturation from the rest of the skin, and there really should be a secondary color added throughout the skin as well, such as on the edges of the robe, in ropes around the robe or something. The shading seems a little weak to, especially in the areas under the team-color bandanna and under the shoulder bits to. The texture applied over the skin really looks like a texture applied over it because it doesn't curve and contour with the folds of the fabric as it really should. Overall the freehand work is decent. The bright team color showing through is enough to say this skin doesn't work properly though :||
This skin has a sufficient enough work needed on it that I'm rejecting it for now as well