I rate this resource by
1/5 and I suggest it to be
rejected due to its poor quality.
1. Im pretty sure, description at THW should be improved.
2. The sound tracks and the texts of transmissions do not fit. They talk that and text other.
3. Loading screen is missing, also I cannot see the loading bar, only the text.
4. Something is wrong with the view, look at this screenshot below. Everything is white, cliffs and hero itself, it's like without a skin, absolutely white. Looks bad and quite nonsense.
5. In Illidan's tranmission, first without a sound track, was a misspell
goules, it had to be
ghouls I guess.
6. It is way too white to observe the fight. I cannot even see what's happening, just too while. Please increase the distance of fog or zoom camera. Look at screenshot, it is unacceptable.
7. I cannot close cinematic while it is on, please implent system which would allow audience to exit cinematic anytime they would like to.
8. Why Illidan said: 'I failed.. Master..' What kind of master? There is no master in the storyline of blizzard and the events are from the storyline of blizzard obviously.
9. Why I see the edge of the game? It is terrible. Look at the screenshot cut below.
10. At the ending, camera mode was turned off and after few moments, victory was mine. Why turning off the camera mode? It was bad, I was able to see my heroes and entire gaming board with minimap.
Afterall, it was a work of one evening. I'm sure there were only basic cameras from the sky, it is not interesting and attrative. Add more cameras from the close, not from far only. I couldn't see fighting screne, but the effects seemed to be not good enough. Few spams of thunder and death coil is not impressive at all. Ending seemed silly, I don't know, maybe I didn't get the joke? Please, once you make a cinematic, play it and look at it by yourself before you upload it here, that's the most important point in my opinion.
Edit:
Well, this is not the first time who my map has this bug..
For remove the white, juste go to World Editor :
Scenario --> Description --> Preferences --> Option --> and click off the cross " use the terrestrial fog "
It is your job to remove it, not the audience who download your resource. It is quite not fair, why to download it if people have to work in order to see it? It is obviously your duty to fix it and update.