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11:31, 1st Aug 2009
zombie2279: Weird. Cloud's shape is wrong and the lightning effect looks funky. I recommend giving the cloud a bit more contrast and outline thickening, to make it look less lol, then changing the colors to something different than the lightning's. I also recommend using a darker blue when doing the lightning and not smudging it, it blends in with the clouds too much.
Rejected until updated.
zombie2279: Weird. Cloud's shape is wrong and the lightning effect looks funky. I recommend giving the cloud a bit more contrast and outline thickening, to make it look less lol, then changing the colors to something different than the lightning's. I also recommend using a darker blue when doing the lightning and not smudging it, it blends in with the clouds too much.
Rejected until updated.