Phoenix (Re-Classic)

[deepstrasz]

Welcome to Prehistory!

https://dl0.creation.com/articles/p010/c01036/Archaeopteryx.jpg

 

[Stormode]

It's impressive how you recreated the phoenix model, also if you could, could you make another version but purple as if the phoenix were magic.

 

[BaiyuGalan]

Beautiful birds.

 

[DarkePacific]

Much better than the original.

 

[Carefree World]

This phoenix is already very beautiful, just missing a pair of feet.I hope you can add a pair of feet to this phoenix model. Because footless flying creatures are the same species as Naga flying snakes.

 

[Bawbz]

This is a great model, however, it has a major flaw that makes it unfortunately unusable for my project: Its TC is barely visible. If you made a version with more TC, I would almost certainly use it.

 

[Liu]

I can't help to use this modle in Boss battle,soooooo cool!

 

[johnwar]

This is a great model, however, it has a major flaw that makes it unfortunately unusable for my project: Its TC is barely visible. If you made a version with more TC, I would almost certainly use it.

I have added a new version I hope it works for you now.

 

[deepstrasz]

I have added a new version I hope it works for you now.

IMO the team colour would work best on all pink-purple edges of the feathers and stuff as for instance yellow is hardly if at all seen due to the FX on the chest/neck.

 

[johnwar]

IMO the team colour would work best on all pink-purple edges of the feathers and stuff as for instance yellow is hardly if at all seen due to the FX on the chest/neck.

Transparent and TC can't be mixed so that's not gonna work, unless I make it like my frost wyrm which would require me to edit and create a new pair of wings and feathers from scratch.

 

[Bawbz]

I have added a new version I hope it works for you now.

Thanks for this, it's much appreciated.

I do however agree with Deepstrasz on some level. I think rather than a large blotch on the back, it might look better if it were more spread out on the unit. For example, the tail feathers are prime real estate for some TC.

One more point of feedback: I think the portrait looks a little derpy. I've attached some suggested alterations to show what I mean.

Regardless, great work!

 

[Bawbz]

Here are some suggestions for where you might add some TC:

• Tail
• Shoulders
• Plumage

(image below)

 

[johnwar]

Here are some suggestions for where you might add some TC:

• Tail
• Shoulders
• Plumage

(image below)

That is a good idea actually, I'll do that.

Edit: The new 'A' version is uploaded

 

[NinjaPio]

congratulations, it's gorgeous!!!