Good one, though I think it still needs some fixing, It's pretty much in the part that ugh, I can't tell what but it's something. BTW I love how you painted it, it feels smooth and I laveht.
The eyes look so small IMO, or not maybe they are just far away from each other, and the mouth feels so small as well, or maybe it's just me, I'm bad at proportions and all thing 2d. But you could leave all of those and what really is weird is the hair, her head looks small but the hair looks to be holding treasures inside and, it's just weird in that part.
It's not a shame, Keep it up, I love ya style and damn that SCC :*